Looking back, I wish I had taken some steps to the left so that I wouldn’t have gotten the shady side of the house and also making the corner of the house straight relative to the framing. Right now I have rotated the framing in order to level the text properly.

Any other advice is welcome!

  • hanke@feddit.nuOP
    2·
    1 year ago

    As you say, the text is very well painted on there and the facade of the building is very well painted as well, creating a field of almost artificial order. I wanted to contrast the very orderly facade with the less orderly background and the clear blue sky.

    I think the contrast would have become way better if I didn’t include the dark side of the building. Now the shadow cuts everything off and is just not pleasant to see.

    • KevinFRK@lemmy.worldEnglish
      1·
      1 year ago

      Ah, I can now see that interpretation, and now understand why you so dislike the shadowed bit.

      • hanke@feddit.nuOP
        2·
        1 year ago

        I passed by again today and got “the good angle”. Turned out that had its downsides as well. I don’t like that edge ruining the contrast between the building wall and the sky. Once again, perspective is messing with me.

        At least it is a little better than the first attempts.