For example, the end of the Expanse series >!Naomi and Amos seperate from Alex who goes to find his son and family. This didn’t really sit that well with me, as why wouldn’t they just go with him? They return to Sol where Naomi has… nothing left. Alex and the Roci are her family and home. So, the thing I would tweak is having Holden, just before he dies, tell her that while he had all of humanity connected together he noticed Filip alive and well in Sol. Then there is a logical reason for them to split up, to find their respective sons.!<

What’s your example of this?

  • stella3books@alien.topBEnglish
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    11 months ago

    In “The Dark Forrest” I legitimately thought the guy’s secret plan was going to be to >!teach everyone how to make psychic waifus like him, so that we all happily die out in a generation, before the aliens arrive!<. I was not correct.